The end of chapter four's font is all messed up and unreadable and the link to chapter five does not work. [Editor's Note: Though we do not host this story, I just looked through it in Firefox 3.6, and didn't see any problem fonts or broken links. Perhaps it's been fixed. 3-9-2010] - Anonymous - Mar-08-2010   

Awesome NCIS story. Nailed all of the characters quirks and Ziva and Abby's sexiness. Would love to read a sequel. - Julie - Mar-11-2010   

Loved it, good read if ur into NCIS. - Luvtigger71 - Mar-14-2010   

Enjoyed the story very much. I like the dynamics you did to the characters. Also how your story flowed. It wasn't a rush to end. I loved the pace. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. - camree - Mar-17-2010   

Awesome story, love the details put into Abs and Ziva. Of course, all the characters! - Zyan - Mar-21-2010   

dont usually read NCIS stories, but i was EXTREMELY bored one night as i had run out of stories from the usual genre i read (xena/gab (duh)) : ) and i saw this one as a hosted story on the what's new page, and since i love the show decided i would read it...anyhow, moving to the point, i thought this was a very well written story and followed the character's personalities really well! great job! - Nicole - Mar-22-2010   

not even finished with the story and i'm sooo writing this I LOVE NCIS and I'm soo Loving this story, i was gonna go to bed tonight, but thats out the water now - Jaye - Mar-29-2010   

I LOVE this story! The character's voices were true to the show. I wouldd love to read another story in this universe. - Anonymous - Apr-07-2010   

great story!!!!!!! - cell - May-07-2010   

This has definitely become one of my favorite stories. I could easily picture it as another NCIS episode the characters were so spot on. I especially liked the English mix-ups Ziva made. "Wild whores could not keep me away" was one of my favorites. Keep up the good work. - Hillsys Stalker - May-23-2010   

Great story with two of my favorite characters. Abby and Ziva are hot. I am so over DiNozzo though I am almost to the place where I would like something unpleasant to happen to him. - rleef - Jun-26-2010   

man, you should have a sequal!!! i can't find too many ncis fanfiction and this one's a great find! :D - choyu - Nov-29-2010   

One of my favourite NCIS fan-fiction's. The characters are so true to form. I love the progression of the story.
Makes me laugh and get hot. :) - Chercheur - Dec-31-2010   

Another great fic from Lisa Countryman. I was familiar with her fics from Voyager fandom, and was happily surprised to find this fic from her. Now I've read this a couple of times, and it's just as good on repeated readings. I've, in fact, recommended this story on various other sites. - Anonymous - Jun-05-2011   

I am a fan of Lisa's writings, from her ST:V work to her other Genre Tales and this is another great work from a great Author. - Kugai - Dec-01-2011