This is great! Another story from Cheyne! And this one has illustrations!!! - kay23 - Sep-03-2009   

This story was such an unexpected delight. Knowing how the movie ends, I didn't expect to be drawn into the lives of the characters that Cheyne has created. Cheyne has created a very memorable tale that I highly recommend! - Anonymous - Sep-06-2009   

This is a must read story! This story gives the Little Jack character what the book and movie lacked; substance. Yes it has violence but it's a western about gunfighters and whores. It's a great read. Thanks, Cheyne. - Corky - Oct-09-2009   

This was very well written even the dialect. I enjoyed reading this like all of Cheyne's work. It did leave me a little sad. Such is life... Great work, Cheyne! - Theia - Dec-09-2009   

I loved this story to death.. I haven't seen the movie yet but I think it will be hard to watch. Compared to Cheyne's story!!.....Vivid..heartbreaking,tear jerker,...absolutely ROC and FLAWLESS. PLease read, you won't regret it. Hey Chenye I love you writting. Did I mention that yet??:)
- vampireslayer2 - Mar-23-2010   

yes... make sure you read this story. - laurie - Jun-07-2010   

It was bittersweet for me. Bittersweet fics usually aren't my cup of tea, but this was wrten so wonderfully and the ending was done so greatly, that I would indefinetly recomend this fic. - Anonymous - Jul-05-2010   

This is such a great story, and such a fun take on the Little Jack character. I LOVED Little Jack in Ghost Town and there just wasn't enough of her!!! Plus, with a certain crystal eyed prostitute, my uber-heart just skipped beat after beat. AWESOME!!!!! - twinsparadox - Jan-03-2011   

Please keep this wonderful story going & Thanks so much for continuing it! - Anonymous - Jan-06-2009   

Cute vignette from Kya's POV. - Emily J. - Aug-19-2009   

Nice story. Great job. - sassy123 - Dec-27-2010   

A good little insite into the character of Kya, the type of person and friend she is. - uber goober - Jul-18-2011   

Wow - what an awesome story! - EC - Jul-22-2009   

Loved the sequel. Keep up the good work :) - LTJ - Jul-25-2009   

Loved the original and the sequel.. - Ginger - Jul-26-2009   

Great follow up to the original. Well done! - Georgia - Aug-25-2009   

Loved it! - Theia - Dec-09-2009   

Love this sequel to Two Cross Side. Well worth the read. - Calloway - Apr-14-2010   

a sequel that outshines the original. both are enjoyable but this has so much more weight. - kc - Jul-12-2010   

Great story, well done. - sassy123 - Sep-22-2010   

Great sequel, just as good as the first story. - uber goober - Jul-20-2011   

Wowwww!!! This story is amazing, with characters intenses, very well written, impossible stop to read before the end!!
Amazing!!! - Leth Cross - Jul-24-2007   

I've had the pleasure of knowing Cheyne slightly longer than forever, served with her in the military and spent many wonderful hours laughing and talking and throwing bad guys up against walls with her. Trust me, she knows what she's writing about here. Reading anything she writes is terrific, and this work is no exception. Do yourself a major favor and read everything with her name on it - including a laundry list if it's available. Cheyne could make that sexy and riveting - she's that good. - notelmerfudd - Jul-27-2007   

Oh yes, this is such a great story. So much fun to read. I put it right next to "and playing the role of herself". Thank you so much, can't wait for your laundry list.
(smile;-) - 29 July 2007 - Inge - Jul-29-2007   

aww, i loved it! sequel maybe? - Anonymous - Aug-04-2007   

WOW!!! Exciting, suspenseful, sexy and daring!! Plenty of characters to love and a couple to hate. A must read from a spectatular author. Thanks Cheyne!!! - VTXSIP - Aug-16-2007   

Cheyne is a master writer. I have read all of her posted work; each story is a masterpiece. Her grammar is exquisite. Her characters entrancing. Her stories--her stories engage you, enchant you--they enthrall.

I am grateful to have had the chance to read such work. - discretemage - Aug-28-2007   

WOW!!! Another home run from Cheyne! These characters are so well drawn and visual I felt like I was watching a movie. That combined with Cheyne's amazing attention to detail makes for a fantastic story. It's a very well written and thought out suspenseful, sexy, passionate story. I loved the quotes at the beginning of each section and appreciated the full cirle Cheyne created with the first and last lines of the story. This is one for the library. Thanks Cheyne!!! - puddle jumper - Aug-31-2007   

EXCELLENT story!!!
Well written, well researched, and better than many published books in this genre. - Balmain - Jan-11-2008   

I have read it again. It is still one of the best stories. Next to.... and Playing the Roll of.... Great story! Love your style. Hot. Thank you for this. - Bernette - May-11-2008   

Great story! One of the best I have read in the genre.Love your work. - Lee - Jul-30-2008   

I think I read this story almost a year ago, and I STILL remember practically all the plot details! It says a lot when you read tons of fanfiction and still remember some of them, lol. Mainly, I just want to say that this is a very compelling story and I recommend it. Both characters are memorable, they're not clich?, and it's very well written. I loved the romance. And good sex. :P - Vanessa V. - Aug-27-2008   

I'm hooked...where's the rest of the story? - rusty - Jan-11-2009   

WOW!!! Exciting, suspenseful, sexy and daring!! Plenty of characters to love and a couple to hate. A must read from a spectatular author. Cheyne, You're the best!!!!!! - Leth Cross - Mar-17-2009   

Absolutely wonderful! This story had me up till 3am. I recommend it to anyone. - Syro - Jun-29-2009   

OMG! Fantastic!!! - Pearl - Jul-15-2009   

This one really rocks! - Anonymous - Jul-23-2009   

I thought after reading Renegade you couldn't do again,
boy was I wrong. This one is just as brillant. Now I am going to read anything with your name on it. - Loving Cheyne - Jul-23-2009   

Amazing, you'll love it. - Brighteyez08 - Oct-08-2009   

Brillant!! - Wolfie67 - Jan-09-2010   

Ex CIA Tia Ramone lands herself in a whole lot of trouble. As she struggles to find her way out of it her life takes an unexpected turn. This is punchy, thrilling and hot! - Sai - Jan-27-2010   

One of my all-time fave Cheyne stories. She really should turn this one into a book. - Calloway - Apr-14-2010   

Very good story. Loved the plot! - Freya - Jun-15-2010   

Fantastic story by a great writer!! More please!?! - JC - Jul-18-2010   

oh, my, my. what a story. i absolutely adore the fact that fiction does not need extraneous violence, action, etc., to be thrilling and down-right captivating. a+ with a smiley. - kc - Sep-06-2010   

I really enjoyed this story. A job well done. - sassy123 - Sep-11-2010   

Holy fantastical story!! Could not stop reading. Just so good! - Anonymous - Jan-21-2011   

i'm on a total Cheyne-fic bender this week and this one did not disappoint. Another compelling storyline with great characters (and some wonderfully hot sex! ... did i say that outloud? LOL!) - Michelle - Apr-09-2011   

...a great story to read over and over again by Cheyne!! - zieta - Jul-11-2011   

Very good story well worth taking the time to read. - uber goober - Jul-23-2011   

OMG LOLOLOL!! What a great little tale and a great idea for a story about X and G!! Leave it to Cheyne to come up with this stuff. Laugh out loud funny! Dialogue is perfect ... witty, delightful even precious! - Balmain - Jan-18-2008   

Oh, my, this was hilarious! I'm not there yet, but my partner is, so I can totally sympathize with Gabrielle. - libris cat - Jan-19-2008   

heheheh adorable :) - Kat - Jan-20-2008   

ROTFL "Amazon death pallet" My coffee spewed all over my keyboard when I read that!! This is a very funny story!! I highly recommend it! - TallTale - Mar-03-2008   

Loved it! - Anonymous - Mar-08-2008   

This is such a great story! I really recommend it! Cheyne you are so funny. Hope to see a lot more of your stories. - Anonymous - Jul-24-2008   

Hilarious!!! A MUST read! - BonnieD - Aug-01-2008   

Hahaha, this is awesome!! Very funny, I loved the 'what if' scenario!! - Jemma - Aug-30-2008   

THIS WAS THE FUNNIEST STORY IVE READ.LOVED IT - TNHANLEY - Oct-24-2008   

XDDDDDDD! Very funny! - AikoujOi - Dec-17-2008   

Oh gods ! ^^ I think I have never laughed that much ! This one would definitely fit for a Xena funny episode :D - Anonymous - Feb-21-2011   

I am so waiting for the sequel to this.

I am sitting at the edge of my seat for the rest of the story to play out. - EC - Jan-07-2009   

Love this storyline. Can't wait to see what comes next. - Diana - Feb-21-2009   

OMG You just have to hurry and continue this. I am soooo waiting for the next installments of this wonderful little tale. Jasper - Jasper - Mar-17-2009   

A wonderful beginning can't wait to see what transpires next. - Anonymous - Mar-17-2009   

Love this series. Cannot wait for the next installment. - tgz87 - May-03-2009   

Cute vignette from Riley's POV - Emily J. - Aug-19-2009   

Loved this series. Great job. - sassy123 - Dec-27-2010   

Another good little vinette but I can't wait to get passed the apetizers and onto the main course. - uber goober - Jul-18-2011   

I wasn't completely convinced of the pairing at first but the amazing writing in this story won me over. Especially loved the ending. Rec read! - money - Dec-22-2009   

what a great sequel to Texas Hold 'em, love this pairing. hope we get another story soon. - rleef - Dec-23-2009   

So happy to see another installment in this series. Thanks! - Ginger - Jul-26-2009   

Another great sequel to the Kya & Riley series. Hopefully more soon?? - rleef - Aug-17-2009   

Loved it and love the series. Please please please continue writing Kya/Riley stories!!!! - Emily J. - Aug-19-2009   

loved the story as well as the other 3 in the series. i must say that they left me in an optimistic good mind set. i thoroughly enjoyed the characters in the series and hope there are more stories to come with these gggrreat characters. kudos!! - vicam - Aug-19-2009   

A continuation of the In the Light of Day series - great story. Definitely read from the begining. Tempting to ask "and then what?" sequel? - Georgia - Aug-25-2009   

A great continuation of the "In the light of day" series, but it isn't linked to the series list (it ends with "Decisions").

For those who wanted to see more of Kya and Riley, this is the story for you! - ILoveUbers - Sep-27-2009   

I want more!! - Anonymous - May-03-2010   

this entire series was terrific. it got my friend interested in fanfic. now she understands my addiction. - kc - Sep-05-2010   

What a great series. job well done. - sassy123 - Dec-27-2010   

Good stories. I'd like to see the series continue. - uber goober - Jul-18-2011   

Great story! Pulls you in and twists you around. Thanks Cheyne for a perfectly rendered Hallows eve tale. - Anonymous - Nov-03-2009   

Happy Trick or Treat indeed. well done cheyne - crv - Nov-05-2009   

Wow! This one really had me going! Great little read. Thanks Cheyne. - tgrgr - Nov-10-2009   

Sad and strange, but very intressting. - Amanda - Nov-20-2009   

Great read, loved the twist at the end! - Peyton Andrews - Jan-02-2010   

I enjoyed this story and in particular, the twist at the end. Very well written and fun to read. - Lyn B - Jan-31-2011   

I really liked this story and hope that there is a sequel. - Shelley - Jul-30-2008   

Loved the story. A must read. It just begs for a sequel!!! - Nancy - Jul-30-2008   

Great story!!! Riley's self discovery, just begs to be continued. - Anonymous - Jul-31-2008   

Sequel please!!! - Leigh - Jul-31-2008   

It was worth the read just to ponder which line the author touts is "the" line in the intro. Fun read! Thank you. - Dusty - Jul-31-2008   

I loved it from the very first sentences and therefore highly recommend it! The only drawback is that you don't want it to end...so I really hope Cheyne is planning a sequel! - Arwen276 - Jul-31-2008   

GREAT STORY, I would love to see more on these characters. - brighteyez - Jul-31-2008   

I enjoyed this story very much and really recommend it to everyone. And as others have said this story needs a sequel it would be great to know where Riley's journey takes her or maybe just how she gets there. - lily - Aug-01-2008   

Another great story from Cheyne, and like others have said...this story demands a sequel. Gotta know what happens next! - BonnieD - Aug-01-2008   

WONDERFUL!!! GREAT STORY !!!! YOU MUST READ IT !!! - Manuela - Aug-02-2008   

I really enjoyed this story - hope there is a sequel - it's criminal to end it at that point! - gillian - Aug-02-2008   

Thanks so much for a really GREAT read! Please say there's more...what happens next for Rye & Kya? Sequel...Sequel...Sequel...PLEASE - Anonymous - Aug-02-2008   

A tender and sexy story about a woman who wakes up in bed with a woman and is forced to analyze her sexual preferences. Very good! - happykt - Aug-04-2008   

Love all the stories by this author! - Anonymous - Aug-04-2008   

oh my god...I need a sequel!!!lovely! - Anonymous - Aug-04-2008   

that was brilliant, very very..how do you say WOW!!!! another way. definitely worth the read - vampireslayer2 - Aug-05-2008   

This story is so sweet, it truly deserves to continue. I hope there will be more to come ... - jaeygatsby - Aug-05-2008   

Truly great story.Would love to read more about these characters. - Anonymous - Aug-06-2008   

OMG!! I so loe this story!! It makes my imaginations come up for more scenarios. PLEASE PLEASE make a sequel for this. This will is going to be BIG! - Fan940 - Aug-07-2008   

Yes! Captivating from start to finish, but is that the end?
A sequel would only add to the intensity and complexity of this well written story. So how about it? - aj - Aug-07-2008   

I really enjoyed this little story. I laughed in so many parts that I had juice fly out of my mouth. Very fun story with fun characters. I highly recommend this story. - Meg - Aug-07-2008   

I don't know why I put off reading this. It's extremely cute and I really enjoyed it. :) Definitely worth the read. - Hillsys Stalker - Aug-11-2008   

fantastic - Anonymous - Aug-13-2008   

I'm not a fan of short stories because they create good plots and then leave you hanging at the end. This one does that but boy is it good! Please read it. - Amanda - Aug-15-2008   

I thoroughly enjoyed this... just like everyone else I am hoping you are in the midst of writing a sequel...great job! - xenalover68 - Aug-26-2008   

I'm not the one to read short stories, but Im glad I read this one. It's sweet, tender, and sexy. Adorable characters indeed. Thanks for this one. :) - Cris - Oct-12-2008   

ok, everybody is sooooo right, this is great story, but i must admit, my favorite is the cameo by the wicked witch of the east, aka aunt virgina. Hey every truly good drama needs a truly evil villian so we have someone we can direct all our negative energy at. Keep it coming Cheyne. GREAT STUFF!!!!!!!!!!!! - toni - Oct-13-2008   

I loved this story from the get go. Amazing writing, funny situations and characters. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!! - Emily J. - Aug-19-2009   

You will never want it to end, such a great short series. - Brighteyez08 - Oct-08-2009   

As with all of Cheynes shorter stories they're inventive, well structured and a pleaure to read and they're especially great for slipping in inbetween something longer and more intense. This little collection is no exception. - Sai - Jan-27-2010   

Very sweet -- - nagol - Apr-02-2010   

excellent serial, it's a lot of fun, thank you cheyne - stitz97331 - Apr-13-2010   

I really liked this story. Great job. - sassy123 - Dec-27-2010   

I really enjoyed this story. I want to read more about these two ladies. Riley's scene with Aunt Virginia is hilarious. It's very well written and a very enjoyable read. - Lyn B - Feb-11-2011   

Loved this. I seriously sat bolt upright and almost dropped my coffee when i got to the end and read "The End" before i remembered there was already a sequel. Phew! It was too good to finish that quickly! - Michelle - Apr-09-2011   

Very interesting start the this series.Well written with a good plot and characters. Looking forward to reading the next tale in the series. - uber goober - Jul-18-2011   

"Gina says you think I'm hot."
Don't know if that's the "best line" mentioned in the intro, but it sure is my favorite! Fun read. Leaves you wanting more! - Hera - Nov-14-2011   

this was painful and i mean that in a really good way. it is a tough topic and it was really well written meaning, as a reader i felt as though i was watching. thank you for artfully & honestly tackling a really tough topic.
i would love to see a follow up story that fills in the gap between the end of the main story and the final paragraphs. - Anonymous - Dec-07-2010   

Damn disappointing about the turn of the events. You know you usually use to see hard trough relations and get back together in the end. Well, this was unexpected. And very real life like.
I was shell shocked with depth of brutal reality.
Surely beat up all sappy stuff you normally read.
Strongly recommend !!! - AMAZONKA - Dec-08-2010   

Thanks for tackling this tough subject. It's a story that needed to be told to generate awareness. Hard to read. I'm glad you choose to end the story the way you did. It is life and very realistic. - Anonymous - Dec-09-2010   

Yes. - Shelly - Dec-11-2010   

Thank you for this magnificent piece of literature. The issue definitely needed to be talked about. - Jaye - Dec-15-2010   

A dark and disturbing, but necessarily so, tale of events that need to be brought to light and hopefully be banished from our community -- lesbian rape. Thank you Cheyne for having the forbearance to tell the tale...and for the ending that brings some light to the main character. - squinty - Dec-16-2010   

Cheyne tackles a difficult subject with her usual grace. She's the consummate writer and gift to the Athenaeium. Due to its necessarily violent nature, it would be inappropriate to give this a spice rating. - offhermeds - Jan-03-2011   

I found this story very powerful to read. It was disturbing to read what happened, but the writing was excellent. Well worth reading, but be warned. It's very dark in parts. I've given no spice rating because of the content. - Lyn B - Jan-31-2011   

This was a very hard read but a story that needed to be written. I don't know women like this, or do I? - ~ Robin ~ - Feb-10-2011   

Bra! Super! Oh Gud hon kan skriva!
Intressant och gripande ber?ttelse...Jag rekommenderar att l?sa. - Z. Rodson - Jun-24-2011   

What a powerful and extremely well told story. You get totally drawn in, and while reading you are aware that something terrible is about to occur, even so you can't help but wish that somehow, it's going to stay a 'fantasy' come true for the character. IMO this would make a fantastic novel, and would help get the terrible truths of this story out there. - Ange - Oct-03-2011   

Good grief, you made me nervous in those last couple of lines!! Knowing the topic before reading the story was enough warning to "safely" get through it but those very last couple of paragraphs I think was the most terrifying; not knowing who she was talking to. Bravo! - Tori - Nov-14-2011   

what an incredible story. It's rare to encounter something so nuanced, lush and well-paced. it's inviting and informative without a hint of prescription. I am completely blown away. READ THIS STORY! and please, Cheyne, give us more. - Anonymous - Dec-20-2009   

I absolutely love this captivating story. It is so wonderfully complex, I look forward to each update. Dale is an amazing strong woman and I am mesmerized by her journey through the military. I really enjoy the details of the military, I feel that with each word that I am there experiencing what the characters are going through. Great characters all around; Anne Bishaye and Shannon Walker are especially favorites. You manage to convey so many emotions from one end of the spectrum to the other! Thank you so much for sharing your hard work! - Chess - Dec-20-2009   

fanFREAKINtastic! a must read. you MUST follow this story! it's great. and funny! and kinda hot when it wants to be. ;) - Anonymous - Dec-25-2009   

This is a great story, but take warning, IT IS NOT FINISHED YET. I look forward to the rest of this one. It is well written and the characters are well defined. Please finish this one. [Editor's Note: It's now finished. 12-28-2009] - Anonymous - Dec-26-2009   

This novel is AWESOME!! You gotta read it...great story, great characters, and I'm extremely pleased that the conclusion did NOT fizzle out and disappoint!! - Sthpaw30 - Dec-28-2009   

Wow amzaing story, the twist at the end was so unexpected. I recommend this story big time to anyone who would like a great read. - Anonymous - Dec-28-2009   

AMAZING!!!!!! Thank you so much Cheyne for this profoundly great story. - Anonymous - Dec-29-2009   

I like it!! Fabulous story and a great read - do yourself a favour kiddies - Courtney - Dec-29-2009   

I never say anything, even though there are alot of great stories here. This one rocks so much that I was compelled to recommend it! I loved every minute of it and was sad that it ended!! - Anonymous - Dec-31-2009   

Great read. I am glad and yet sad that the story has ended. Each page keeps you wanting to continue reading until the end. Any chance for a sequel?? - Anonymous - Jan-01-2010   

Wow! This story had me from the first page. I totally loved it and would love to read a sequel. - Barb - Jan-01-2010   

This story was absolutely wonderful. - Anonymous - Jan-01-2010   

Wow! what a ride. Great story. Won't waste more words, just read hers. 'nuff said. - Anonymous - Jan-02-2010   

I enjoyed it very much. The writing is good and she tells a great story. Few typos, to glaring. Worth the read. - Ginny - Jan-03-2010   

An exceptional story. Fully-fledged characters, interesting situations and a concrete story-line full of twists and turns that will keep you guessing till the very end. - RB - Jan-09-2010   

This author is one of the best online, she has a way with words, and her stories never disappoint. - Brighteyez - Jan-10-2010   

One of the best I've read!! Would love to see a sequel :0) Thank you for this wonderful piece of literature!! - Anonymous - Jan-10-2010   

The devil is in the details and I can happily say I've been burned. 6 hours...and it still wasn't enough. - Shelly - Jan-16-2010   

I must concur, this one IS begging for a sequel. I hope Cheyne will here our pleas! I'm re-reading it again. So funny and interesting and great. she's got a way with words. - Fan - Jan-18-2010   

Excellent military story. Dale Oakes finds herself back in basic training working undercover for the US Army. The author has provided at length so much attention to detail that you feel you are doing the basic training along with Dale and her co trainees. This story is not only informative but exciting to read. You get pulled into the relationships new and old and find yourself trying to unravel this complex mystery right up to the very end where it kicks you in the pants! Awesome and very well written. - Sai - Jan-20-2010   

I have to agree with all the other reviews. This is an excellent story. At first glance it didn't appear that it would appeal to me, but boy was I wrong. It had excellent characters, plot and humor. It was worth every minute. I hope there will be a sequel. - Anonymous - Jan-23-2010   

Awesome, one of the best I've read for a while, couldn't Put it down well worth a sleepless night. PLEASE LET THERE BE A SEQUEL. - Chris - Feb-10-2010   

Out of all your stories and others I've read, this by far has to be the best story I have have read. It was excellent and the attention to military detail was superb, Thank You for another wonderful read.. - Jasper - Feb-10-2010   

Great story! I don't know much else to say, that hasn't already been stated. The plot and character development are wonderful. The story grabs you from the start and keeps hold of you through "The End". I look forward to this author's future work. - TCloud - Feb-13-2010   

This was an amazing story,the military details seem very accurate and the plot is highly intriguing. I didn't expect that ending, surprising and very well executed. I'd love to see a sequel or another stand alone with these characters. - renegadewolf - Feb-13-2010   

Truly outstanding story and well worth the time to read it. You are an amazing writer. We hope the muse continues to be good to you. Thanks. - JettBlk - Feb-20-2010   

Absolutely fabulous! This story should be published if it hasn't already been. I'd pay good money for this in paperback! A detailed, delicious read. Major kudos to the author for a terrific read! - Robin - Robin - Feb-24-2010   

i'm reading it again. :) it's just so good! - Anonymous - Mar-12-2010   

As a former Army MP, I can honestly say that Cheyne's descriptions are dead on. Ya had to have been there grrl. Good to read such a great story by a fellow grunt. - Anonymous - Mar-17-2010   

The story is so good. I couldn't put it down. I loved the military detail and the flawed character of Dale. Wonderful. Good on ya, Cheyne! - Blue - Mar-19-2010   

ANNALEIs STAMP OF APPROVAL - the 'brass' this story has earned is well deserved. - Anna Lei - Mar-28-2010   

brillant !!! really enjoyed this wonderful story - Trish - Apr-07-2010   

I love, love, love this story. Detailed, different and good to the last word. I was a Jarine and I still liked it! Do yourself a favor. Read it. You won't be sorry. - Calloway - Apr-14-2010   

Great story. Was a pleasure to read. I'd love a sequel, hint, hint... - Anonymous - Apr-29-2010   

Really great story. Very good insight into how the military actually operated back then. Speaking as someone who was a military brat for 18 years, nothing much has changed, its still a SNAFU - MoSeS - Jul-03-2010   

WOW. This was an amazing story. I'm sure your busy, but you really need to write a sequal. I would love to follow these characters. Thank You - Paladar33 - Jul-22-2010   

What a great story!! Keep up the good work! Thanks!!
I never leave a comment.... So this says alot!! - Anonymous - Aug-07-2010   

Great read! Would love a sequel to know what happens to these people! - lyneX - Jan-04-2011   

"Permission To Recover," was unlike anything I have read in the tens of thousands of previously read books.

It was a new and refreshing look into the undercover military police lifestyle and nuances of the women in the late 70's.
The story was informative and insightful. It is obvious that the you did major research on the material, had military collaboration, or lived the life.

I felt as though the story was experienced as a participant, and not just read as an observer.
I was captivated by the complex nature of the characters and their developement throughout the story.
It was an emotion journey, from humorous and passionate, to the sadness of useless death.

I would give it a five star rating for an oustanding literary performance of a non-Uber, Original piece.

Thank you once again for a thoughtful, well written novel. Please, continue to grace us with new adventures.

Gloria

p.s. Did someone say " Sequel" or "Series"... (grin) - Gloria - Jan-22-2011   

I'm simply at a loss for words. I just love the characters Anne Bishaye and Dale, so wonderfully complicated. Cheyne, everyone's hoping for a sequel...maybe a love triangle involving Dale/Anne/JJ ? - Anonymous - Feb-08-2011   

...I think I heard someone say "Sequel" too...nope, I'm sure of it! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Pleeeease! - Mas - Mar-09-2011   

Awesome book. Accurate, exciting, suspensful. Sequel PLEASE. Need to follow JJ and Dale. And don't forget about Shannon and Anne. Great book - E-12 MP - Mar-13-2011   

An amazingly great read! i love a story that is so rich in detail that you are swept away with the story and characters. Despite this already being such a wonderfully long story i could have easily say there for another two days and kept reading. Thank you. Thank you! - michelle - Apr-09-2011   

I wanted to rush to the ending, but i really was not looking forward to the writing ending i wanted it to go on forever, such an intriging story, Thank you Cheyne for sharing. - Lizzie - May-01-2011   

great story, hope there's more to come.
- Anonymous - Jun-10-2011   

Cheyne puts a lot of attention to detail in Permission to Recover and she does that in a truly captivating manner. You can feel the work and effort it took for this story. And it is a wonderful one at that. - wt-ger - Jul-12-2011   

That was a good story if a little long on the military discription. The end was definitely not what I was expecting. Definetly did not see that coming. All in all worth the time it takes to read it. - uber goober - Aug-01-2011   

Wow!!!as a Soldier, I was impressed with every single detail that was written about Basic Training and being closeted in the Military. The flow of the story is intriguing and kept me up all night to find out what was going to happen next.It also brought back a lot of my Basic and AIT memories...
THANKS for a great novel... - DL - Aug-10-2011   

I DESPERATELY WANT A PART 2 TO THIS!! Like SERIOUSLY! Sooo damn good! Read it like 5 times already... - Massa - Sep-13-2011   

I tried reading this story months ago, but I couldn't seem to get my mind wrapped around it. I then came across it again yesterday afternoon, and I couldn't stop reading til I was finished. Every character drew me in and captivated me. Dale and Shannon have you wishing that you were them because they seemed to make the best out of any situation. I hope that there is a sequel in the works because I want to find out what happens with our two leading ladies. Where their lives are going to take them? Especially Dale and JJ. So I would like to reiterate what everyone else has mentioned. SEQUEL PLEASE!!!!!! Thank you for the great story!!!! - Kim - Sep-29-2011   

when i seen it was over 500 pages i didn't want to read it, but it sucked me in from the beginning. A MUST READ!!! - saphic_lover - Nov-30-2011   

F-ing fantastic. Long but very worth it. I wish it hadn't ended as suddenly as it did but I loved it none the less. - Pickles - Jan-19-2012   

This story is the bomb. it has everything you are looking for. Read it and you will pray for more. Big up urself Chyne. You're a great writer. - Chinwe - Jan-29-2012   

This story is the bomb. it has everything you are looking for. Read it and you will pray for more. Big up urself Chyne. You're a great writer. - Chinwe - Jan-29-2012   

Good story, but what a tear jerker. - Netta - Apr-23-2011   

Heavy but beautifully written. - crv - Apr-24-2011   

Another extremely well written story from Cheyne. It's a tough read but well worth the time. - Anonymous - Apr-28-2011   

Oh my goodness--- what an amazing story and such a touching, unique perspective. I felt like I was right back to that fateful day. Great work! - TWINSPARADOX - May-07-2011   

This is an excellent story. It's powerful and very moving. I think everyone should read this story, if they can. My words can't truly describe how it touched me. Excellent. - Lyn B - May-15-2011   

Although I usually read for pleasure, there are times when a story is deeply moving - this is one of those stories. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND this story to you. Not only is it well written as you would expect from Cheyne, this story brings the horror, pain, dedication and honour that was all part of 9/11 and the days following to life. Sadly, I believe it to be true that many of the people who went far beyond their duty that day, are now suffering from life threatening illnesses - it seems as though they are paying the highest price one can ask - they are giving their lives so others may live - please let their dedication and life mean something. - CoolNik - Oct-27-2011   

Blazingly Brilliant!!
Cheyne, again, thrills with her attention to detail in this time bending tale of love. A very satisfying story that successfully bridges, and blends, not only time but also gender, race, and culture.
An EXCELLENT and ABSOLUTE must read!!
- Balmain - Feb-14-2008   

What a great ride!! I LOVED this story! I highly recommend this one! - gcc - Feb-26-2008   

Very good read. This story embraces our differences and shows how a group of people can join together for a common cause and perserver over a common enemy. - Anonymous - Mar-05-2008   

Link between chapter 12 & 13 not working.It just keeps looping back to chapter 12. - Anonymous - Mar-10-2008   

cross between future and past works well. nice to run across a different kinda tale. well written and recommended for those who like going into the past. - Anonymous - Mar-14-2008   

A wonderful story. Though, it ends with chapter 13. Is this finished? - Anonymous - Mar-28-2008   

A wonderful story. For those that are having issues with the links, simply change the number in your address bar, ( if it says renegade13 somewhere at the end of the link, change the 13 to 14 and hit enter.) That should bring you to the next page. - Anonymous - Apr-05-2008   

This is by far the best western story I've read. Cheyne woves tales that hook you from start to finish. A great read! - Anonymous - Apr-24-2008   

Brilliant! Captivating and engaging with wonderful character development. - Anonymous - May-13-2008   

Took a little while to get into, but stick with it. It's well worth the effort. Good read. - Ape - May-21-2008   

This was a very entertaining and adventure filled read. I highly recommend it for readers who are looking for kick butt adventure, redemption, and some fabulous love-making. - happykt - Jun-13-2008   

fantastic - Anonymous - Jul-12-2008   

I hate westerns but I loved this. My only complaint (not the fault of the author) is that you have to go directly to the RAB website to find part 14 Otherwise this is an absolutely Craacking read. - LsC - Oct-28-2008   

This is the first time I read anything by this author and I loved this story! It was fast paced and intriguing. Liked the characters, liked the storyline. - carole - Nov-08-2008   

Okay, so it's possible that I have a weakness for Westerns and maybe I'm a bit biased...with that being said, I absolutely loved Renegade. If you're a fan of the genre you have to give it a read. The love story was beautiful and the plot engaging. Two Thumbs! - nicole938 - Dec-03-2008   

The BEST western story of X/G imo!! Highly recommended! - Luie - Feb-19-2009   

Wow, this is a great story! Wish I had read it sooner. - Arassar - Feb-21-2009   

****spoiler****
A dirty cop finds herself in deep do do and the only means of escape is to travel back in time. Not by choice she lands back in the old west where she quickly starts down a road of trust, love and redemption.
At first I found it tough to read as it starts by throwing a multitude of names, dates, places at you. As you get through that and really start the story in earnest you quickly realise all that gubbins (clutter) was necessary. Well worth a look. - Sai - Mar-12-2009   

love it, very good story. wow!!!! - lady - Mar-25-2009   

This is one of my altime favorites. The link to the conclusion is not working. - rleef - Jun-10-2009   

This was a good read. Lots of humor, a good western background, two lovely ladies... I really enjoyed this one! - filfil - Jun-20-2009   

If you havent read this one, put it on your 'must read list'. - Brighteyez08 - Oct-08-2009   

Nice plot. Well written... got me to delay my college studies this week...! Argh!! AND two big dark rings under my eyes. Be careful with that, whoever read this one. - Millie D'Cast - Nov-07-2009   

OMG!!!!! this Novel is UNF!!!! After a long time, I found a story that I absolutely love!! I wil definately by this one!!!! This a bestseller!!!A nice mixture of Sci-Fi, Action, Romance & who can forget..... THE OLD WEST. - hellraizer77 - May-18-2010   

Interesting storyline, good characterization, well-plotted... Nice job ! - Condorcet - May-20-2010   

After Clandestine (full of angst and passion) and the sex-tensed Permission To Recover (which I found very informative and well done), I didn't expect this, less dark and with lots of funny parts. Plus, it may rather be classified as Pre-1900 instead of Modern, or both, since the 4/5 of the story are WWW.
Anyway, I enjoyed it a lot. - M. D. Gibralta - Oct-22-2010   

Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. One of my favorite ubers! Sequel please? I wanna see what Trace, Rachel, and the gang are up to:) - Anonymous - Jan-08-2011   

Yes! Do read it. I love a good Uber Wester,I have read it a few times and even bought the book in print. A sequal is in definate order. - cpo - Feb-18-2011   

While the beginning felt somewhat forced, and while the... Transition (When you read it you'll know what I mean) could have used some work it really picks up after the first part. It's a kick ass story that is truly worth a read. If you have even the slightest urge to read something western related, I suggest you read this. You won't be disappointed. - Laziel - Feb-24-2011   

The BEST story of all stories, not just by this author. - Anonymous - Feb-25-2011   

I've now read this story twice,and I highly recommend it. - Anonymous - Mar-10-2011   

exellent story - agata - Jun-14-2011   

Just read this again, and just loved it again. - ~M - Jun-22-2011   

What a great story. Job well done - sassy123 - Jul-12-2011   

That was excellent! I think this is the best Cheyne story I've had the pleasure of reading yet.Well done! - uber goober - Aug-07-2011   

Really great to read. i couldn't stop reading it once i started - Anonymous - Sep-09-2011   

Really great to read. i couldn't stop reading it once i started - Anonymous - Sep-09-2011   

Wow. Was that ever a good read. Well worth investing the time! - Georgia - Sep-14-2011   

This was a great read. The author uses an interesting strategy, setting up the story's major themes in one setting, then unexpectedly transporting the main character to a completely different environment where the same themes are then fully developed. Really very entertaining, with a satisfying ending. - XenaLives - Sep-24-2011   

Wow...this caused me to tear up. How true and painful the way it was put across. - Anonymous - Jan-06-2009   

This was a beautiful peace that honors our fallen gay and lesbian soldiers and those who still serve their country in silence because of a prejudice rule. Hopefully it will go the way of the same rule that didn't blacks and whites to serve together. Well done!! - mapsnika - Jan-10-2009   

Thank you. - rleef - Jan-11-2009   

This is an absolute "Must Read". A powerful emotional and intellectual indictment of unequal treatment. - wasabigrrl - Jan-12-2009   

Amen. - jls - Jan-15-2009   

YOU GO GIRL !!!! - TONI - Jan-16-2009   

You said it all, well written. Bravo! - Dawn - Feb-20-2009   

WOW! You said so much in so little a space. Great Story! - Charlie13 - Apr-14-2009   

Yes ma'am! - Anonymous - Apr-28-2009   

Highly emotional and highly insightful; and right on target. This piece should be mandatory reading for every military officer and our commander in chief. - jt - Apr-29-2009   

Stunningly brilliant. A mother's rant that is spot on. How many times in real life has this been repeated? If only change would come from this. Maybe a copy sent to all politicians ... - Georgia - Apr-30-2009   

OMG!!!! This is a wonderful story.... I wish more people would read this and let Our Government know that Gays in the Military should have the same rights.... They serve and die just as much as other people do.... I am ashamed of how are Government and citizens treat Gays in the Military and to those who are not... We are people too just because we don't have a man in our live doesn't mean we can't love too... People need to get a life and not worry about what we do in our homes..... - Xenafan33 - Jun-15-2009   

As we used to say in the Army, Hooah. Outstanding. - Roselle - Jul-23-2009   

Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! Awesome real story and real issue. Read it;I repeat myself READ IT and join the cause of all the families that want equality for all - xenamary - Sep-17-2009   

Damn. Really cuts to the heart of the matter, doesn't it? - xivren - Dec-07-2009   

wow.....just wow...+++ - Trish - Feb-01-2010   

I remember reading this a while back and it still move me. A great way to show up the hypocracy of a system that drastically needs changing. - Kugai - Feb-06-2010   

I am stunned - not being in the US, not having any connection to their army (I assume its the same for the other forces?) - in 2010 it seems impossible to have this type of horrific mentality.
Thank the Goddess that the someone other than a Bush is in the Whitehouse and has the courage to look at change......thanks Cheyne for bringing this to the attention of other women....and to any spouse or entlisted person, my heart goes out to you.....we are thinking of you - Anonymous - Mar-29-2010   

This was the Cheyne story that hooked me. It don't get anymore real than this. - Calloway - Apr-14-2010   

Excellent. Powerful. A must read. Cheyne is very eloquent in showing how hypocritical DADT was. - Lyn B - Jan-31-2011   

What a powerful message. Your tale was very moving! It was too short, I know it had to be. You did such a wonderful job with so few words! Thank you for sharing this with us! - Pixieydust - Jun-14-2010   

Wow. This is a powerful short story. I like the stories that Cheyne writes because the topics are always so varied and thought provoking. This one conveys so much. Read it. - Lyn B - Jan-31-2011   

I so enjoy Cheyne's writing. Thank you for the hours of entertainment. - rleef - Jul-07-2009   

what a great story. the writing was compelling and natural. you're a really talented writer! - Anonymous - Nov-13-2009   

Love it, wish there were more Abbie/Olivia pairings. - GB - Dec-18-2009   

I couldn't stop reading this story. It's that good! - Mel - May-24-2007   

This is an amazing story. There's everything included here: mystery,humor,love and adventure. I spent the morning reading and I thoroughly enjoyed. Thanks, Cheyne, for this story. - Sherry - May-24-2007   

a fun read. enjoy! - cam - May-24-2007   

Great Story! Stayed up most of the night reading this, i especially liked the "mud slinging"! - TreasureDragon - May-24-2007   

Thank you for sharing your gift with the rest of us, loved every word, waiting for more. - Keren - May-26-2007   

Fabulous. Great to welcome such a wonderful addition to the collection of bards we have. Can only hope that Cheyne has other stories on the go that I can look forward to checking out in the future. - Anonymous - May-26-2007   

This is a great story! - ter - May-26-2007   

Well done! The twist at the end was unexpected. - jd - May-27-2007   

i'm happy to have read this story - it's a great read, different and thought-provoking. It just shows that not everything is as cleanly cut as we'd like it to be. And then there's the power of love...it is just so heart-warming plus reaffirming, awww, i love the two main characters, especially Lisa! thanks Cheyne for a wonderful story! - Kat - Jun-30-2007   

This is such a fabulous, well-written story. And funny!!! One of the best stories out there. - chatham23 - Aug-23-2007   

- Anonymous - Aug-30-2007   

Great read, excellent writing and a very good plot. Kudos to the bard. - Emi - Sep-04-2007   

Great story! Well written intrigue and intensely funny!! Loved the bit with the political canvassing of the neighborhood along with many other parts which were truly well done, and sexy, and kept me guessing! Put this on your must read over and over list!! - gcc - Sep-25-2007   

Great story alltogether, the mother reminded me alot of my own which made the story all the more real for me, but hey what can i say but WOW! - Jaye - Oct-28-2007   

this was an awesome story - poeticvamp - Feb-11-2008   

This was actually a good story. An entertaining read. I wanted to breeze through it but I couldn't because there was always something that kept me interested. Read it if you haven't. You will be surprised how good it turned out. - Meg - Mar-23-2008   

Compelling read. - Juanita Joubert - Apr-06-2008   

Loved this story. Had me laughing out loud in parts as well as on the edge of my seat with the drama. Nice love scenes as well. - linda aka cygirl1 - Apr-28-2008   

I'm not sure how I missed this when it was first posted but this grabbed my attention and held me captive until the end! Excellent story and very well written! Way to go Cheyne! - scoopj - Feb-10-2009   

wow! what an unbelievable and incredible story. the ending has an amazing twist you would not believe. read it and you will not be sorry. - crv - Dec-15-2009   

Well that certainly was a good read! I haven't been this captivated in any fictions in awhile. So I'm happy I've found this! - Anonymous - May-12-2010   

Beside Tropic of Hunter(The), I have and love reading all Cheyne's stories. Very talented. All her stories all well written. With action, excitement and sense of humour, trust me; you want more from Cheyne !! - eastern - Jan-20-2011   

Excellent story! - Anonymous - Feb-25-2011   

another great story from Cheyne. I thought it was a deliciously sweet homecoming romance... and then got a terrific surprise when the suspense built and the mystery was revealed. Thank you! - Michelle - Apr-12-2011   

Funny story...I enjoyed it better than Clandestine. - wiggy - May-21-2011   

FANTASTIC!
Definitely worth your time to read.
Hopefully Cheynes' muse will grace us all with a sequel on these two intersting characters. - Christi - Jun-04-2007   

Great story!! - lyneX - Jun-07-2007   

FABULOUS!!!

Engaging, well-written, beautifully sequencethis enchanting story proclaims a very promising author. - discretemage - Jun-13-2007   

WOW! I want more! I hope your doing a sequel!
- leia - Jun-16-2007   

Don't miss this yummy little story that, in glorious detail, celebrates the chance encounter. Ripe for sequel. Thank you Cheyne. - Anonymous - Jul-05-2007   

- Anonymous - Aug-30-2007   

This story is FANTASTIC!! I don't know how on earth I missed this one as I'm a huge fan of Cheyne's writings! Short but detail packed, this story is a visual and brilliant little nugget of sultry fun. Definitely TWO THUMBS WAY UP and permanently ensconced on my "read often" list!! - Balmain - Jan-05-2008   

This is one hot little story. What are you waiting for? Go! Read!! - gcc - Jan-11-2008   

BLEEDING FANTASTIC!
Definitely needs a sequel
- Anonymous - Jan-17-2008   

Criminy, I need a cold shower! Gotta sharpen my pool cue now... Too bad the spice index only goes up to 10. - Dusty - Jun-21-2008   

fantastic! - Anonymous - Jun-25-2008   

Very sensual story about a stranger in town who dares a pool shark to a winner take it all game! I want a sequel or an expansion of this story! - happykt - Aug-04-2008   

more!more!more! sequel? plz! - Anonymous - Mar-18-2009   

How could you do it? How could you write a story so short and then so perfect?
It's bleeding HOT, bleeding SMART, bleeding everything! Wow!
So well done! Congratulations! - Anonymous - Jun-10-2009   

I give this the three S's. Short, sweet and sexy!
This oce is ideal if you're looking for something to fill the gap between longer stories. - Sai - Jan-27-2010   

Good story. It's beautifully written and the sexual tension that builds throughout the story is great. I like how the story draws you into the characters lives. Well worth reading... make that, definitely worth reading! - Lyn B - Jan-31-2011   

This story is fairly short but very well written. It definetly leaves you wanting to read more of these two interesting characters. - uber goober - Jul-20-2011