Truly impressive! Please give us more! - Anonymous - Jan-07-2009   

Oh my god!! i loved it!!!! I love any story that has basketball or soccer as the occupation of one of the main characters. This one is great so far, i hope the author posts more soon as i went to work with only 3 hours sleep because i enjoyed the read soo much - saracath - Jan-08-2009   

Please finish...soon - Anonymous - Jan-08-2009   

Wonderful story so far. Can't wait to see how it ends - Kali - Jan-08-2009   

MORE PLEASE ! GREAT STORY ! I highly recomond this one. - pat - Jan-08-2009   

Loving it a lot so far - great story and well written! Can't wait for more.. - Anonymous - Jan-09-2009   

Great storyline, very entertaining! Hope to see more soon! - Liz - Jan-09-2009   

Great story..can't wait - KT - Jan-10-2009   

A richly textured story that effectively reveals a tale of love using flashbacks and present day narration. I couldn't put it down and encourage Ms. Burke to complete it. - wasabigrrl - Jan-11-2009   

Impressive debut! Great characters, stirring plot!
More please! - Anonymous - Jan-11-2009   

MY GOD U HAVE TO FINISH THIS!!!!!!!!!! PLEEEEEEASEEEEEE?????? - Anonymous - Jan-12-2009   

Absolutely love this story. I can't wait to read the rest! Awesome debut story. - Jaye - Jan-12-2009   

I really like this story so far and the writing style is great! Please finish! - Lady D - Jan-14-2009   

Lovely! Thanks for also posting the ending quickly. I was a little worried this would be more story added to the ranks of the unfinished. Great to know my inherent cynicism was unjustified. I look forward to reading more from this author whether with these characters or new ones. - Kali - Jan-14-2009   

One of the most interesting stories I have read in a while. I couldn't stop reading!!! Do yourself a favor and READ THIS. - Anonymous - Jan-14-2009   

Great story and great characters. Thanks to the author and hope to see more with these characters. - cam - Jan-14-2009   

One of the best I have read in a while. Will there be more? I hope there will be more. - Anonymous - Jan-15-2009   

What a great read!! Definite room for a sequel. I recommend everyone to read this if you haven't already. The two main characters are wonderfully written. Read it!!!! - Tracey - Jan-15-2009   

I would love to have a published copy of this story to add to my library!!!!!! Very Good story ! - ! - Jan-15-2009   

Great story. Love to see volume 2 especially expansion of the Meg/Danny story line. - rleef - Jan-16-2009   

Great story. I hope to read more to read more from this author. - Marty - Jan-17-2009   

good story - a sequel would be great!!! - courtney - Jan-17-2009   

Fantastic!! Loved the story and it's finished!!! ;-) - Anonymous - Jan-19-2009   

Smashing good fun. Hope to see a sequel. - Anonymous - Jan-20-2009   

Nice romance with some interesting supporting characters. - crskcks - Jan-20-2009   

wow...I hope there will be more - Fra - Jan-21-2009   

Probably one of the best stories I have read in a long time. Waiting on continuation of this story or next story author has - Lisa P - Jan-30-2009   

I haven't finished it yet.. but from what i've read so far the story is great. - Boo - Feb-05-2009   

This is a very good story. Good work Burke! - lyneX - Feb-05-2009   

Amazing story. Please sequel. - rosii59 - Feb-05-2009   

What a great story. Hope to see more from this writer. - Anonymous - Feb-18-2009   

This is a great story. Character that you want to meet and a story which you wish doesn't end. - Kerri - Mar-05-2009   

Really loved it, hope to see more of your work in the future! - Versi - Apr-13-2009   

Best story ever. Please keep writing, you are a great author! - cris - Jun-17-2009   

A really awesome story. I am glad I took the time to read this. Thoroughly enjoyable and an awesome ending. - Hoqoq - Oct-14-2009   

Great read! Really enjoying this author's work. Is it weird that I was most interested in the young couple at the end? - Anonymous - Oct-19-2009   

Absolutely FANTASTIC!!!! Love this story. I read this story a long time ago and just found it again. Worth multiple reads.. ;o). Great job with the characters. Can't say enough A++. - Texas_wild - Nov-04-2009   

Please we need more from this two characters..
Could you continue this story pls, we are really interested to know what's going to happen to them..Thank you. - Anonymous - Dec-06-2009   

Can you say original? The stories Catherine Burke writes are so different then most of the stories on this site. Look forward to your next posting. - Anonymous - Jan-31-2010   

what a great story and a great inspiration! - bookgeek - Apr-19-2010   

great story! - bookgeek - Apr-23-2010   

Loves this story. It rocks!!!!! - sassy123 - Aug-27-2010   

that was a really great story. It's different from the first version but i can't made my mind on witch one i like the most! anyways i'm glad i send you an email and was able to discover new stories of you. just keep going...
and i higly recommand to the one that are passing by to stop to read those beautifully written stories - Anonymous - Sep-09-2010   

Still a great read :) I'm glad I read it again. - lyneX - Sep-17-2010   

Oh Yes!
Underbar historia!. Jag kunde ej sluta l?sa. Jag ?lskar din stil och form att skriva. F?rs?tt att g?ra det. - Zenia Rodson - Sep-30-2010   

What a great story. I really enjoyed it. - sassy123 - Dec-07-2010   

Beautiful written story. - Anonymous - Jan-01-2011   

I enjoyed reading this story. Romantic and full of drama and passion, it held my attention all the way through:-) A few sentences were a little confused, but it didn't detract from the excellence of the story. Very enjoyable. - Lyn B - Apr-16-2011   

What a wonderful story. This is one of those great well written tales that once you start reading you won't want to stop till the end. Great job Catherine Burke! - uber goober - Jun-18-2011   

Good story....needs a sequel; mainly to confirm speculation on the identity of the "possible brother." Also, the ebook version only downloads a small fraction of the story. - TKD Vixen - Jun-30-2011   

I love your stories...more please...pretty please - Anonymous - Oct-26-2009   

please continue their story... i'd love a happy ending for those 2. thanks. - Anonymous - Oct-26-2009   

I hope there will be more of this thought provoking short story. - wasabigrrl - Oct-27-2009   

yeah....Catherine Burke done it again!! awesome - easteden - Oct-27-2009   

Yes this needs more to it, maybe Amys version or an extension of this one, it has so far to go. - Luvtigger71 - Oct-28-2009   

I would love to see more of this story. - Anonymous - Oct-28-2009   

Definitely want to read more! I don't normally read short stories but since I loved your other works so much I gave this one a shot...REALLY hoping to read more about these girls in the near future! - Anonymous - Oct-28-2009   

Very good writing; good story line. . . but not a short story. Wrapped up too quickly. . . needs to continue. This just had to be a lead in. - nagol - Oct-29-2009   

Please let there be a sequel!! Faith and Amy belong together. - Anonymous - Oct-31-2009   

C. Burke's stories are completely addicting and I extremely encourage the author to continue this story. I don't think their journey is quite over yet. - Hoqoq - Nov-03-2009   

Catherine Burke shines once again. Anxiusly awaiting a sequel. - Anonymous - Nov-03-2009   

Continue this story please! - kdsw - Nov-03-2009   

please continue their story... - Anonymous - Nov-04-2009   

you've got a great start here! I agree - there should be a sequel :) - Rhybeka - Nov-05-2009   

Yes!!! Do write a sequel!!PLEASE!!!!I really enjoyed this story and wondered what was really going on towards the end.I'd love to see Faith and Amy get together again and have a better ending. - Marg (Aussie Fan) - Nov-06-2009   

Fantastic stories... but you are keeping us on the hook... what next!!! - Anon - Nov-13-2009   

love this author and so will you. hope she writes a sequel or uses this as the first chapter in a novel because I need more! - rleef - Nov-17-2009   

Truly gifted author. Hope for more soon. - Anonymous - Nov-18-2009   

This can't be all. This is a perfect begining but these characters have potential for a true saga like we saw in American Sweethearts and With All My Heart. - Anonymous - Nov-29-2009   

It is a good story, but sad enough if it is not continued... - easteden - Dec-22-2009   

a sequel would be awesome... loved it, thank you :) - omkhalil - Dec-25-2009   

ohh this needs a sequal! AWESOME! - Amanda - Jan-07-2010   

Great story! But we must have a sequel. Please! - LambdaPrincess - Feb-13-2010   

Por favorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr, continua la historia, escribes sensacional. - Bertha Lilia - Aug-13-2010   

WOW! Great story and, yes, PLEASE write more about these characters. I am curious to know where they shall meet again... - Jadedgirl77 - Oct-01-2010   

hope there is a sequel, or follow up... i want more :D - lesley - Jan-03-2011   

I'd like to read more about these two women. Good story. - Lyn B - Jan-21-2011   

I really enjoyed this. Please continue. - Anonymous - May-15-2011   

Sequel pleeaasssee
- Anonymous - Apr-02-2012   

Love and loss. Very thoughtful. Great story. - Condorcet - Nov-17-2009   

I enjoy everyting this author has written. Always original! - Anonymous - Nov-17-2009   

**** SPOILER ALERT **** it tore my heart out and made me cry - rleef - Nov-17-2009   

How timely. And it said everything that anyone of us would feel. - nagol - Nov-18-2009   

A truly heartrending story, its a tear jerker!! Very, very well written. So many couples are placed in similar positions and with little support under the "don't ask" policy. - CoolNik - May-06-2010   

Well DADT is officially gone... poignant story in the current climate, I'm english but I always support the military personnel who do a job i could never do but get no support for who they are.

brilliantly written, i wont say anymore as it would spoil it for others, but if you come across this from catherine burke read it please.. i dont always read short stories but this one MUST be read! - Lesley - Jan-03-2011   

Very poignant and bittersweet. Well worth reading. - Lyn B - Mar-12-2011   

Very intriguing. I love the interactions between the characters and how the relationship develops. Great pacing. Can't wait to read more. - Kerr - Apr-17-2009   

A well written story. Wonder when can I read the next chapter.
Please Catherine dont torture us too long. This is a highly recommended story for all to read. - Easteden - Apr-19-2009   

Awesome! So stoked to see another story by this author. Loving the characters and tension as well as the background romances. - Anonymous - Apr-20-2009   

Fantastic as always! Keep it up! - Anonymous - May-31-2009   

Keep it coming. Loving it so far! - KT - Jun-02-2009   

More please well written, enjoying it - Anonymous - Aug-17-2009   

I'm digging this so far. I really hope the author finishes the story. - Hoqoq - Oct-02-2009   

Amazing story telling! Anxiously awaiting the conclusion. - Anonymous - Oct-03-2009   

WOW!! What can I say? I'm left speechless. Incredible story, incredible author. Desperately waiting for more! - NW - Oct-05-2009   

Simply amazing! Hope to read more soon. - Anonymous - Oct-15-2009   

Great story. Ms. Burke has done it again. You have to read this! - KT - Oct-16-2009   

I'm gonna come out here and just say it...this has got to be one of the most amazing stories I have ever read. Definitely in my top 10 for a long time to come. C. Burke is an amazing author and I definitely recommend reading her other story, "America's Sweetheart", as well. This was just a great story, period. - Hoqoq - Oct-16-2009   

great story. - Anonymous - Oct-17-2009   

This is a very good read with a very original plot conflict. Thoroughly engaging. - wasabigrrl - Oct-18-2009   

had started this before it was finished. so glad it was completed. Catherine pens a great story with very believable characters. Enjoy - rleef - Oct-20-2009   

Another wonderful story by a talented writer. Completely original story line which will draw you in immediately. A MUST READ!!! - shelby - Oct-20-2009   

excellent read sorry it took so long to find - Anonymous - Oct-21-2009   

I absolutely loved this story.. I would be very interested in reading more about them in the future. Great job!! - Julie - Oct-24-2009   

WOW!!!!! Amazing story. Amazing writer. - rosii59 - Oct-25-2009   

very good story! I enjoyed it very much... sequel maybe? - Alice - Oct-27-2009   

A well written story, enjoyed it lots, certainly recommed it. - Luvtigger71 - Oct-31-2009   

Great story. Holly is much more forgiving than I ever would be. - JettBlk - Feb-11-2010   

Sweet story and so realistic. So sad that so much damage can be done by malicious teenagers. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us. I enjoyed it tremendously. Now - I have to read your other online stories. - Anonymous - Apr-08-2010   

Great read - Anonymous - Oct-28-2010   

Good read. I must say though if my girlfriend had that little faith in me and treated me like shit, there would have been no love story to write that's for sure! - yuka - Jan-25-2011   

I have mixed feelings about this one, it's a good story, there's a great plot, it's worth reading it. I just wished it was a little bit more polished, I jumped over a few parts, there was some longish parts. With a better editing it could be an amazing story. - Anonymous - May-02-2011   

I absolutely loved this story. It is an incredible tale and I high recommend reading it. Catherine Burke is a very talented story teller. - uber goober - Jun-21-2011   

Very nice read. Lots of romance. Certain amount of angst, but plausible and realistic characters. Well worth reading. - Georgia - Nov-20-2011